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*strike "abbreviated TNFMG"-- sourced from express.UK, a source for sensational news, better not to appear so early in the article. Austin, Jon (2017-12-09). [https://www.express.co.uk/news/weird/890008/God-messenger-prophet-The-New-Message-From-God-Marshall-Vian-Summers-Reed-Summers "'GOD'S MESSENGER' Rocky Mountains 'recluse' claims to be prophet - with new announcement"] not exactly a bad source, if appearing further on. | *strike "abbreviated TNFMG"-- sourced from express.UK, a source for sensational news, better not to appear so early in the article. Austin, Jon (2017-12-09). [https://www.express.co.uk/news/weird/890008/God-messenger-prophet-The-New-Message-From-God-Marshall-Vian-Summers-Reed-Summers "'GOD'S MESSENGER' Rocky Mountains 'recluse' claims to be prophet - with new announcement"] not exactly a bad source, if appearing further on. | ||
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*Beliefs section moved after all else to emphasize the NM as movement over NM as a body of work by MVS. Resulting in citations completely out of order. | *Beliefs section moved after all else to emphasize the NM as movement over NM as a body of work by MVS. Resulting in citations completely out of order. | ||
| − | *strike "a musician" as never something MVS has promoted in his history. Likely | + | *strike "a musician" as never something MVS has promoted in his history. Likely [https://www.bibliotecapleyades.net/vida_alien/esp_allies_humanity_5.htm#Interview%20by%20Bret%20Lueder |
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*"teacher of the blind" can use the Project Camelot interview (edited and unedited on various channels) hosted on this channel | *"teacher of the blind" can use the Project Camelot interview (edited and unedited on various channels) hosted on this channel | ||
| − | *strike the move from California, | + | *strike the move from California. Needed citation and clarification to add reception of STK in Albany, NY. |
*strike "in 1989" --not supported, contradicted here: https://www.community.newmessage.org/how-steps-to-knowledge-came-to-be/ | *strike "in 1989" --not supported, contradicted here: https://www.community.newmessage.org/how-steps-to-knowledge-came-to-be/ | ||
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*strike the crowdfunding and the Marina Koren reference. Tangential. | *strike the crowdfunding and the Marina Koren reference. Tangential. | ||
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| + | Saving this reference to support MVS going around promoting AOH: Marshall Vian Summers. "The Alien Agenda and the Ethics of Contact" at the 37th Annual MUFON International Symposium, July 2006, Denver, CO | ||
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| + | Saving this also, same. https://youtu.be/JMa21GsoZpI (before the 3:00 mark) This is on Reed Summers' channel but Webre has name recognition in UFOlogy--I feel we simply must namedrop in the references. | ||
Revision as of 01:35, 23 July 2021
Line by line explanation for changes
- strike "abbreviated TNFMG"-- sourced from express.UK, a source for sensational news, better not to appear so early in the article. Austin, Jon (2017-12-09). "'GOD'S MESSENGER' Rocky Mountains 'recluse' claims to be prophet - with new announcement" not exactly a bad source, if appearing further on.
- citation needed for Boulder origin. https://ourspiritualquest.com/2017/06/08/another-ufo-religious-cult-exposed-background-of-marshall-vian-summers-by-norio-hayakawa/ is a weak source, maybe o.k. here. Supported here https://www.newmessage.org/worldwide-community/society/sanctuary
- reference #2 now substitutes gururating.com for the two nmfg references, with gururating supplying the links to those texts. The summary statement of the NM is expanded, replacing the intro to Beliefs section. Bolded to show addition.
- Beliefs section moved after all else to emphasize the NM as movement over NM as a body of work by MVS. Resulting in citations completely out of order.
- strike "a musician" as never something MVS has promoted in his history. Likely [https://www.bibliotecapleyades.net/vida_alien/esp_allies_humanity_5.htm#Interview%20by%20Bret%20Lueder
source] is weak.
- "teacher of the blind" can use the Project Camelot interview (edited and unedited on various channels) hosted on this channel
- strike the move from California. Needed citation and clarification to add reception of STK in Albany, NY.
- strike "in 1989" --not supported, contradicted here: https://www.community.newmessage.org/how-steps-to-knowledge-came-to-be/
- Citation needs to credit interviewer and date Pete Price, broadcasted by Radio City 96.7, Liverpool on 25th Nov 2012. Template:Citation
- strike the Inner Guidance Training if no citation is found. Word order will need a little adjustment.
- strike the Pete Price interview Nov. 25, 2012, as source for the founding of The Society. Not mentioned. Citation needed for this and for the change in the name. https://ourspiritualquest.com/2017/06/08/another-ufo-religious-cult-exposed-background-of-marshall-vian-summers-by-norio-hayakawa/ not a source we want to overuse but it's there.
- This links to the NMFG channel on youtube. Need a specific reference. Template:Cite web
- and was inserted to combine sentences so the reference supports the preceding.
- "wide social media presence" needs more evidence or explanation.
- strike the crowdfunding and the Marina Koren reference. Tangential.
Resources
Saving this reference to support MVS going around promoting AOH: Marshall Vian Summers. "The Alien Agenda and the Ethics of Contact" at the 37th Annual MUFON International Symposium, July 2006, Denver, CO
Saving this also, same. https://youtu.be/JMa21GsoZpI (before the 3:00 mark) This is on Reed Summers' channel but Webre has name recognition in UFOlogy--I feel we simply must namedrop in the references.